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Poem 1
Low Tide by April Lindner
The poem is a 16-line poem with no rhyme scheme. The lines very in length. Even though there is no rhyme, the poem has a rhythmic effect to it, although the rhythm varies from line to line for example, the rhythm, the rhythm in the first 4 lines is alike – U | U | U | U|. However, it changes in the next line to | U | U | U | U | U. It also varies in the next line to and so forth. The poet uses alliteration in “Low Tide” especially the “S” sound, the sound that the water would make along the shore: “surf slips,” “ secrets,” silk. The metaphor in the poem is the comparison between the lowering tides to a strip tease dance. The words ”more strip tease” describe the way the tide slowly falls back to reveal more and more of the shore. The “surf slips back” as a strip tease dancer would “slip” out of her clothing. The poet says the “show” suns two times a day, referring to the two low tides each day and also to the strip tease “shows.” The tide ebbing is also a “slow disrobing” as a strip tease is. The shallows “expose crinkles,” just as a dancer would expose her body. When the poet talks about “what’s left veiled undulates,” she is actually talking about the sea life floating hidden in the currents. The double meaning here is the dancer’s “veiled” part’s of her body, which she moves in an “undulating” or suggestively waving motion. At night when the tide “unfurls,” it lets loose together the things that it exposed in “silk,” or in beautiful moonlight water. In the same way the striper “unfurls” her wrap and hides her “secrets,” or body parts, in “silk,” or her robe.
In addition to the metaphor, Lindner personifies the tide as a stripper, who wraps up he secrets I her robe. The poet also uses a simple very effectively: “crinkles tender as the lines a bed sheet etches on skin.” The lines and marks left by the tide are compared to marks made by lying in bed. Her descriptive images give a lyric quality to the poem as well: “shallows webbed with gold ripple.” Draws a picture of sunlit waves; “rich nether tangle of the rockweed and rotted wrack” brings the image of the under water sea plants; the tide “black and glistening, tipped with moon” helps the reader to picture a silky black robe, tipped with silver that a stripper might wear.
Poem 2
Eleanor Rigby – John Lennon & Paul McCartney
This “poem” is actually lyrics to a song by the Beatles. It talks of the theme of loneliness and isolation of people in a society where no one cares and where people have lost faith and religion. The choice of the title ”Eleanor Rigby” seems to say that this woman represents the many alienated people in our world whose names are unknown or forgotten by others. The poem is constructed of 8 stanzas. The first and last are 2 lines and repeat each other. The line length in the other stanzas varies to from 3 four-line stanzas to 3 six-line stanzas. The 2 line stanzas repeat the sentence, “Ah, look at all the lonely people!” calling the reader’s attention to the social problem from the beginning and emphasizing it at the end. The four line stanzas repeat “All the lonely people,” but further ask, “Where do they all come from?” What is their story? Why are they isolated? The remaining three stanzas tell the story of two of these people – Eleanor Rigby and Father McKenzie. Eleanor “lives in a dream,” and “waits at the window” for someone to come for her. She’s “wearing the face that she keeps in a jar by the door.” These words paint the image of a woman who depends on makeup for her “public” appearance. Another image is of Father McKenzie “writing a sermon that no one will hear.” People are not interested in religion. When Eleanor Rigby dies, she is “buried along with her name.” Just as no one came for her funeral, no one will remember her after she is gone. When she dies, Father McKenzie buries her, but “No one was saved.” To the writers, his work as a priest is worthless. She has not been not saved. The tone of the song is a sense of sadness and of isolation. The writers achieve this through the imagery and through the repetition of phrases such as, “All the lonely people, where do they all belong?” There is rhyme in the poem. Lines are repeated to achieve rhyme in verses 1, 3, 5, 7, and 8. In verse 2, “door” rhymes with “for.” In verse 4, “hear” rhymes with “near,” and “there” rhymes with “care.” In verse 6, “name” rhymes with “came,” and “grave” rhymes with “saved.” Although the lines vary in length there is a definite rhyme to the song. Also, the repetition of lines adds to the rhythmic quality.